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Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s the best lesson your grandparents taught you?
It was about history.
I like my grandma telling about history.
She sometimes tell me about legends.
But I love history story that is about Chosun.
I love Korean history!
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Here\'s your edited essay, [이름]! Thanks for sharing your story about your grandma. You seem very close.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s the best lesson your grandparents taught you?
It was about history.
>> correct
>> or: I would say, history.
I like my grandma telling about history.
>> I like my grandma talking about history.
>> or: I enjoy my grandma telling me stories about history.
She sometimes tell me about legends.
>> She sometimes tells me about legends.
But I love history story that is about Chosun.
>> But I love listening to her stories about the Chosun dynasty.
I love Korean history!
>> correct
>> or: I love listening to stories about our Korean history.
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