lessons leaned from my mistakes

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA

ESSAY: Most people feel that they have \"learned some lessons\" in their life. They may have made some mistakes that taught them something. What is one thing you have learned from your past? What would you do differently if you could? Remember to be specific.

I agree with that anybody can make mistakes and that person who makes a mistake can learn something important to improve or get better their life.

>>>  I agree that everybody can make mistakes and that person who makes a mistake can learn something important to improve or get better in life.
For me, when I was studying in University I was really lazy and didn\'t studying almost at all.

>>> For me, when I was studying in university, I was really lazy and didn\'t study almost at all.

At that time I just thought about my future will be alright without any evidence.

>>> That time, I thought my future will be alright without any evidence.

As a results my grade were very low around graduating timing.

>>> As a result, my grade were very low during graduation time.
After graduate university I entered a company and I can aware about importance of efforts.

>>> After graduating university, I entered a company and I was aware of the importance of exerting efforts.

And I felt regret about my university time and my lazy behavior in the past.

>>> And I felt regretful about my university time and my lazy behavior in the past.

If i can go back to university I would do my best to learn everything.

>>> If I could go back to university, I would do my best to learn everything.

 Anyway now I know that importance of someone\'s life is efforts for everything on my face.

>>> Anyway now I know that the importance of someone\'s life is exerting efforts on everything.