let me get it straight

2011-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Erica

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We have art forms called "Media Arts" or "New Media Arts" these days. I'm expaining that those are not "media and art." One can say every work made by computer technology is a piece of media arts, or specifically, new media art. I wrote about "new media arts", exactly digital arts a few years ago and have been studying about them. :)

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Hi [이름], Your composition is very interesting. Digital arts are very amazing because I think that this kind of art requires not only talent but also patience and passion. Many people also appreciates this kind of art. Take care and have a good night!   CORRECTIONS: We have art forms called "Media Arts" or "New Media Arts" these days. >>These days, we have art forms called "Media Arts" or "New Media Arts" I'm expaining that those are not "media and art". >>CORRECT!  One can say every work made by computer technology is a piece of media arts, or specifically, new media art. >> One can say every work made by computer technology is a piece of media art or specifically, new media art.I wrote about "new media arts", exactly digital arts a few years ago and have been studying about them. :) >>I wrote about new media arts specifically digital arts a few years ago and I have been studying it :)  

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