Let me introduce by myself
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, im YG. im 20 years old.
Ive lived in Sould since i was born in Seoul.
I received bachloer and master degrees in electronic engineering from H univ. and S Univ., respectively.
So. i started working in a company for 3 month, which makes me happy cause im satisfied that i do something for earning.
My hobby is playing basketball during summer season. And, Playing pingpong or Doing swimming is also my hobby during winter season. Personally, I`m someone who prefer to excercise when i get stress because all of that can relieve my strees so much.
The reason why im trying to speak in english is that i want to be more fluent in speaking in english. So, I tried to think what i should do now in english because i've heard that this can help me to be more natural to use english.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I\'m so happy to receive your very first composition as my student. If you really are serious about improving your English skills then I encourage you to not only attend our classes but also to do your homework or to write anything in English here. This is good practice in expressing yourself as well as using words or expressions you learned in class. Let\'s work hard together to achieve your goal in becoming an exceptional English speaker. Take care!
T. Aurora
Hi, im YG. im 20 years old.
>>Hi, I\'m YG. I\'m 20 years old.Ive lived in Sould since i was born in Seoul.
>>I was born and raised in Seoul.I received bachloer and master degrees in electronic engineering from H univ. and S Univ., respectively.
>>I received a bachelor and master degrees in Electronc Engineering from H and S University respectively.So. i started working in a company for 3 month, which makes me happy cause im satisfied that i do
something for earning.
>>So I started working in a company 3 months ago which makes me happy cause I\'m satisfied that I\'m doing something to earn a living.My hobby is playing basketball during summer season.
>>My hobby is playing basketball during the summer season.
And, Playing pingpong or Doing swimming is also my hobby during winter season.
>>Playing ping pong and swimming are also my hobbies during the winter season.
Personally, I`m someone who prefer to excercise when i get stress because all of that can relieve my strees so much.
>>Personally, I`m someone who prefers to exercise when I get stressed because exercise can relieve so much of my stress. The reason why im trying to speak in english is that i want to be more fluent in speaking in english.
>>The reason why I\'m trying to speak in English is that I want to be more fluent in speaking in English.
So, I tried to think what i should do now in english because i\'ve heard that this can help me to be more natural to use english.
>>So I thought of studying English through the phone because I\'ve heard that this can help me be more natural in using English.
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