Let me introduce my best friend to you.

2010-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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My best friend is named Huh We met in high school and It has been almost 10 years since we became friends Actually, his first impression was not that good. But as I got to know him , I realized he was very good man. Since he lives in Japan now , We can hardly meet each other. so we usually talk on the phone once a week. we mostly talk about each other's life ,jokes and girls. I have been to Japan to meet him in march. I stayed there for 5 days, and we had a really good tme. He showed me japan as if he had been a tour guide. I really like him and hope our friendship will last forever.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름].I guess you have a friend that you can treasure forever.Based on what you said he was great man like you.I remember the saying "Birds with the same feather flock together" that's why you get a long so well.I'm really amaze about your composition it was almost perfect.I notice minor errors.Please continue doing so,Goodluck!   LINA   My best friend is named Huh >>Correct >>my best friend’s name is Huh.BetterWe met in high school>>Correctand It has been almost 10 years since we became friends>>CorrectActually, his first impression was not that good.>>CorrectBut as I got to know him , I realized he was very good man.>>CorrectSince he lives in Japan now , >>Correct We can hardly meet each other. >>We hardly meet each other.so we usually talk on the phone once a week. >>Correctwe mostly talk about each other's life ,jokes and girls.>>CorrectI have been to Japan to meet him in march.>>I have been in Japan to meet him last MarchI stayed there for 5 days, and we had a really good tme.>>CorrectHe showed me japan as if he had been a tour guide.>>CorrectI really like him and hope our friendship will last forever. >>Correct  

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