Let me introduce my family.
학생이 쓴 원문
Let me introduce my family. I have 3people who are dad, mom, and younger brother. At frist, my dad is 49years old but he likes tennis which is very energenic exercise. He is sociable and friendly. So he is leader at many meeting. My mom is good at cooking. So she likes making food for other people. And she is very positive woman. Although we meet difficult situation, she looks bright side of the problem. And she helps us comfortable. At last, my younger brother is considerate and diligent. He is also good at science and basketball. And he is very handsome and very tall. So my brother is called UMCHINA,perfect man,which is Korea new word.
Homework - seriously, extremely, awful, careful, sad
Yesterday, thank you for your concern. Now, I am trying to adapt the college life.
강사 첨삭
Hello So Hee,
Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate it. Thank you also for sharing something about yourself through this composition. Just continue if you wish to and I would be glad to learn more about you. I am really impressed about your family.^^
See you on Monday!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
Let me introduce my family.
>>Correct!
I have 3people who are dad, mom, and younger brother.
>>We are 4 in the family. My dad, mom,me, and my younger brither.
At frist, my dad is 49years old but he likes tennis which is very energenic exercise.
>>My dad is 49 years old. He likes tennis which is a very energetic exercise.
He is sociable and friendly.
>>Correct!
So he is leader at many meeting.
>>He is a leader in any meeting he has.
My mom is good at cooking.
>>My mom is a good cook.
So she likes making food for other people.
>>Correct!
And she is very positive woman.
>>And she is a very positive woman.
Although we meet difficult situation, she looks bright side of the problem.
>>Although the situation is difficult, she looks on the bright side of the problem.
And she helps us comfortable.
>>She also makes us feel comfortable.
At last, my younger brother is considerate and diligent.
>>My younger brither is considerate and diligent.
He is also good at science and basketball.
>>Correct!
And he is very handsome and very tall.
>>Correct!
So my brother is called UMCHINA,perfect man,which is Korea new word.
>>So my brother is called UMCHINA, which means perfect man in Korean.Homework - seriously, extremely, awful, careful, sad
>>Homework:
1. Correct!
2. Correct!
3. Correct!
4. Correct!
5. Correct!Yesterday, thank you for your concern.
>>Thank you for the concern yesterday.
Now, I am trying to adapt the college life.
>>Correct!
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