Let me introduce my self

To give you an idea about who I really am, and let me start by saying my family. There are four members in family. first of all my father is a pharmacist and he is very generous to us who are my younger brother and me. but his body is a little comfortable. I mean that he is a handicap. although he is uneasy, he always said me "despite of fail you must challeng and challenging". I think because of this word I could existence now. my mother does either.she also has a passion about us. like a edcucation. If she has a chance of time, she always takes us to english town as possible. and then both of my parents are sustain us from back. but my brother isn't satisfy my parents anticipation...........I'll write the rest tomorrow.

Hey [이름]! I am very pleased at your composition. You were able to tell me a lot about your family. This topic is very interesting because you are blessed with great parents. Anyway, these are some of my corrections for you. Also, I've added some other ways of expressing your sentences. Good job!^^ Karla To give you an idea about who I really am, and let me start by saying my family. >>To give you an idea about who I really am, let me start by saying something about my family. >>To give you an idea about who I really am, let me start by talking about my family. There are four members in family. >>There are four members in my family. first of all my father is a pharmacist and he is very generous to us who are my younger brother and me. >>First of all, my father is a pharmacist and he is very generous to my younger brother and me. but his body is a little comfortable. >>But his body is a little uncomfortable. I mean that he is a handicap. >>CORRECT >>He has a physical disability. although he is uneasy, he always said me "despite of fail you must challeng and challenging". >>Although he is uneasy, he always tells me "despite of failure you must confront challenges." I think because of this word I could existence now. >>I think I am existing now because of this word. >>I owe my existence to this word. my mother does either.she also has a passion about us. >>My mother does too, she also has a passion for us. like a edcucation. >>Like an education If she has a chance of time, she always takes us to english town as possible. >>If she has the chance and the time, she always takes us to English town as often as possible. and then both of my parents are sustain us from back. >>And then, both of my parents sustain us. but my brother isn't satisfy my parents anticipation. >>But my brother doesn't satisfy my parents' anticipation. I'll write the rest tomorrow. >>CORRECT