let me introduce my work place.

2010-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I am working at IIPTI, International Intellectual Property Training Instituition, which is not located main street but outskirts in Daejeon where I live. In the mornig, I go to work early. Because It's refreshing. Whenever I enter the company I smell the scent of flowers and grass. My company services good contents to various people. So We should be equipped with pleasant surroundings. There are many plants and convenience for rest and recreation like billiard hall, table tennis room, tennis court and soccer field. It is good to me too. Yesterday all the emplyees including my dean played soccer game after work. I didn't like soccer game but l liked the chicken and beer after the game. It is a nice place. Isn't it?

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Happy Friday once again!! Wow, you never mentioned before that there are actually some facilities in your company wherein you can enjoy yourself during your break. That is fun I think. You know what, your grammar is improving as time passes. As you can see I only have minimal corrections to your sentences. Keep it up okay. Have a great weekend!!! Lei J   I am working at IIPTI, International Intellectual Property Training >>correctInstituition, which is not located main street but outskirts in Daejeon where I live.>>It is an institution, located on the main street but outskirts in Daejeon where I live.In the morning, I go to work early.>>correct >>I go to work early in the morningBecause It's refreshing. >>correctWhenever I enter the company I smell the scent of flowers and grass.>>correctMy company services have good contents to various people.>>correctSo We should be equipped with pleasant surroundings.>>correctThere are many plants and convenience for rest and recreation like billiard hall, table tennis room, tennis court and soccer field.>> There are many plants and facilities to have rest and recreation like billiard hall, table tennis room, tennis court and soccer field.It is good to me too.>>For me, it뭩 good too.Yesterday all the employees including my dean played soccer game after work.>>correctI didn't like soccer game but l liked the chicken and beer after the game.>>correctIt is a nice place. Isn't it? >>correct

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