Let me introduce myself.

2015-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Let me introduce myself. My name is [Name] sanhwi. My English name is Zeus. I’m 13 years old. My family is Father, Mother, and Brother. I like to play piano. When I was in the 6th grade, I won the highest award in the student piano contest. I like reptiles. From the 4th grade to the 6th grade I was breeding a red corn snake and turtle. My favorite subject is math. It’s because my math teacher said to me, “You look handsome after hair cut.” And she said, “Math is a life guard science.” I like her talk.

강사 첨삭

Good morning my dear [이름]!!   You just don\'t know how happy I am to see an essay from you! Thank you so much dear.^^ I hope to see more. Most of your sentences are correct. I didn\'t doubt your ability in making correct and good sentences. I just hope that you will bring out that skill when we are having conversations. Take care and see you again tomorrow.   ~Teacher Shanee   Let me introduce myself. >>> Correct!My name is [Name] sanhwi. >>> Correct!My English name is Zeus. >>> Correct!I’m 13 years old. >>> Correct!My family is Father, Mother, and Brother. >>> My family members are Father, Mother, and Brother.I like to play piano. >>> I like to play the piano.When I was in the 6th grade, I won the highest award in the student piano contest. >>> Correct!I like reptiles. >>> Correct!From the 4th grade to the 6th grade I was breeding a red corn snake and turtle. >>> Correct!My favorite subject is math. >>> Correct!It’s because my math teacher said to me, “You look handsome after hair cut.” >>> It is because my math teacher said to me, \"You look handsome after having/getting a hair cut\".And she said, “Math is a life guard science.” >>> Correct!I like her talk. >>> I like what she said.

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