Let me introduce myself.
학생이 쓴 원문
Let me introduce myself.
My name is [Name] sanhwi.
My English name is Zeus.
I’m 13 years old.
My family is Father, Mother, and Brother.
I like to play piano.
When I was in the 6th grade, I won the highest award in the student piano contest.
I like reptiles.
From the 4th grade to the 6th grade I was breeding a red corn snake and turtle.
My favorite subject is math.
It’s because my math teacher said to me, “You look handsome after hair cut.”
And she said, “Math is a life guard science.”
I like her talk.
강사 첨삭
Good morning my dear [이름]!!
You just don\'t know how happy I am to see an essay from you!
Thank you so much dear.^^
I hope to see more. Most of your sentences are correct. I didn\'t doubt your ability in making correct
and good sentences. I just hope that you will bring out that skill when we are having conversations.
Take care and see you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee
Let me introduce myself.
>>> Correct!My name is [Name] sanhwi.
>>> Correct!My English name is Zeus.
>>> Correct!I’m 13 years old.
>>> Correct!My family is Father, Mother, and Brother.
>>> My family members are Father, Mother, and Brother.I like to play piano.
>>> I like to play the piano.When I was in the 6th grade, I won the highest award in the student piano contest.
>>> Correct!I like reptiles.
>>> Correct!From the 4th grade to the 6th grade I was breeding a red corn snake and turtle.
>>> Correct!My favorite subject is math.
>>> Correct!It’s because my math teacher said to me, “You look handsome after hair cut.”
>>> It is because my math teacher said to me, \"You look handsome after having/getting a hair cut\".And she said, “Math is a life guard science.”
>>> Correct!I like her talk.
>>> I like what she said.
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