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Hi, i’am Phil. I graduated from the university last 2010. I went to the military last 2010 as R.O.T.C(Reserve Officers' Training Corps) lieutenant. Last year June 30, finally I came back real world so I didnn’t have much times. I want to speak english well and get a job. I decided to study till I am satisfied with my english skill. In March or April or May, opportunities to apply to company will be given me(a civil service exam & e.t.c). I want to get an OPIC certificate as [이름]n as possible in addition to influence speaking. Please Let me know what I have to do. I make an effort to listen to english program in radio. I feel that you are going to increase my skill & confidence. thank you for reading my introduction.

Hi there, Phil! Thank you so much for your composition. You have such an impressive profile. I know that you have what it takes to become a fluent speaker in the future. You just have to believe in your ability and don\'t ever give up on your goals. I will also do my best to help you. Let\'s work hard together. We can do it! Take care and see you in class! T.  JanE ^^ Hi, i’am Phil. >> Correct I graduated from the university last 2010. >> Correct I went to the military last 2010 as R.O.T.C(Reserve Officers\' Training Corps) lieutenant. >> Correct Last year June 30, finally I came back real world so I didnn’t have much times. >> Last year, on June 30, I\'ve just come back to the real world, so i didn\'t have much time. I want to speak English well and get a job. >> Correct I decided to study till I am satisfied with my English skill. >> Correct In March or April or May, opportunities to apply to company will be given me(a civil service exam & e.t.c). >> In March, April, or May opportunities to apply to companies will be given to me (civil service exam & e.t.c.) I want to get an OPIC certificate as [이름]n as possible in addition to influence speaking. >> I want to get an OPIC certificate as [이름]n as possible. Please let me know what I have to do. >> Correct I make an effort to listen to english program in radio. >> I make an effort to listen to English programs on the radio. I feel that you are going to increase my skill & confidence. >> Correct Thank you for reading my introduction. >> Correct