Let me introduce myself more detail^^

2012-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi^^ Last class, I introduced myself to you. You already know my job, age, my family mambers.And also I said about my boy friend. Actually I have a lot of things about my boyfriend because we have been together for 5years. I have spent most of my time with my boyfriend since we have met.We first met in "chorus club". That club is consisted of students ofUniversity of medicine & nursing. In a drinking party after a regular concert we have, I and my boyfriend fall in love:-) It's not an introduce for me (but my boyfriend), but I want you to know about my lovestory^^ Any way, I'll tell you my strength and my weakness of learnign English. Actually, I started English study later than my peers. So I have a weak Grammer skill and a weak vocabulary. But I think my pronunciation is not bad. Because I have a talent to mimic others. So I can read well the written senteses but I have a difficult to express my own thinkings. So I want you to teach me a lot of Eng.expression^^ I'll do my best^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you so much for sharing your enchanting love story to me. You should write a book about it.^^ I also admire your talent to mimic sounds. I think that is very amazing! See you in our class.^^ -T.Jane Let me introduce myself more detail^^ >>Let me introduce myself in detail. Hi^^ Last class, I introduced myself to you. >>CORRECT!  You already know my job, age, my family mambers. >>You already knew my job, age and my family members And also I said about my boy friend. >>And also, I told you about my boyfriend. Actually I have a lot of things about my boyfriend because we have been together for 5years. >>CORRECT! I have spent most of my time with my boyfriend since we have met. >>CORRECT! We first met in \"chorus club\". >>CORRECT! That club is consisted of students ofUniversity of medicine & nursing. >>That club is consisting of students from the University of Medice and Nursing.  In a drinking party after a regular concert we have, I and my boyfriend fall in love:-) >>In a drinking party after a regular concert, my boyfriend and I fell in love. It\'s not an introduce for me (but my boyfriend), but I want you to know about my lovestory^^ >>It\'s not an introduction for me but for my boyfriend because I want you to know more about my love story.Any way, I\'ll tell you my strength and my weakness of learnign English. >>Anyway, I\'ll tell you my strength and weakness in learning English. Actually, I started English study later than my peers. >>Actually, I started learning English later than my peers.  So I have a weak Grammer skill and a weak vocabulary. >>That\'s why I have a weak grammar slii and a weak vocabulary.  But I think my pronunciation is not bad. >>CORRECT!  Because I have a talent to mimic others. >>CORRECT! So I can read well the written senteses but I have a difficult to express my own thinkings. >>I can read well the written sentences but i have a difficulty to expree my own ideas.  So I want you to teach me a lot of Eng.expression^^ >>I want you to teach me a lot of English expressions.  I\'ll do my best^^ >>CORRECT!

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