let me introduce myself to you.

Hi there, Mr. [이름]!

Thanks for your composition! Thanks for doing your homework. Through this, I can get to know you better. I hope that you will feel comfortable with me in class. See you then!^^

T. JanE ^^

I am 44 years old.

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And I am a Korean as you know.

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Just kidding. ha ha..

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Most of all, I want to make a great money if possible.

>> Most of all, I want to make a great amount of money if possible. 

So I study english.

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I like your name, Jane.

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directly speaking english is my first experience in power english.

>> It\'s my first time directly speak in English through Power English. 

Thanks.

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I have learning english in all my life but directly speaking english is first here.

>>  All my life I have been learning English, but it\'s my first time to directly speak in English here.

It \'s very good to me.

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I am much interested in it.

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Thanks anyway.

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