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I like your point in here!
Definitely we need a huge help in our decision making.
I want to share something that helped me in decision making in our next class.
Talk to you soon!
~Teacher Eve.
Let\'s guess that you have a crystal ball that tells you about yourself.
>> Correct!
Some people would ask their future life; what kind of jobs they will get, when they will die, or how much they will have.
>> Some people would ask about their future life; what kind of jobs they will get, when they will die, or how much they will have.
However, I would not ask about my future.
>> Correct!
It\'s because if we know our future, our life becomes boring.
>> Correct!
I would not try to develop myself and change something.
>> Correct!
Therefore, I think, trying to know about future is not a good idea.
>> Therefore, I think, trying to know about the future is not a good idea.
I want to ask my mind.
>> I want to ask about my mind.
For example, my major is elementary education, but sometimes I want to study media technology.
>> Correct!
If I decide to study media, I have to take an university entrance exam again.
>> If I decide to study media, I have to take a university entrance exam again.
In this situation, how can I decide?
>> Correct!
My mind changes everyday.
>> Correct!
Therefore, I\'d like to ask real state of my mind.
>> Therefore, I\'d like to ask about the real state of my mind.
Do I really want to study media even though I should take an exam again?
>> Correct!
It would helpful because many people don\'t know their mind truly.
>> Correct!
The crystal ball helps us listen to our mind.
>> Correct!
It means it would help us solve a difficult problem.
>> Correct!
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