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2020-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

Let\'s guess that you have a crystal ball that tells you about yourself. Some people would ask their future life; what kind of jobs they will get, when they will die, or how much they will have. However, I would not ask about my future. It\'s because if we know our future, our life becomes boring. I would not try to develop myself and change something. Therefore, I think, trying to know about future is not a good idea. I want to ask my mind. For example, my major is elementary education, but sometimes I want to study media technology. If I decide to study media, I have to take an university entrance exam again. In this situation, how can I decide? My mind changes everyday. Therefore, I\'d like to ask real state of my mind. Do I really want to study media even though I should take an exam again? It would helpful because many people don\'t know their mind truly. The crystal ball helps us listen to our mind. It means it would help us solve a difficult problem.

강사 첨삭

I like your point in here!

Definitely we need a huge help in our decision making.

I want to share something that helped me in decision making in our next class.

Talk to you soon!

~Teacher Eve.

Let\'s guess that you have a crystal ball that tells you about yourself.

>> Correct!

Some people would ask their future life; what kind of jobs they will get, when they will die, or how much they will have.

>> Some people would ask about their future life; what kind of jobs they will get, when they will die, or how much they will have.

However, I would not ask about my future.

>> Correct!

It\'s because if we know our future, our life becomes boring.

>> Correct!

I would not try to develop myself and change something.

>> Correct!

Therefore, I think, trying to know about future is not a good idea.

>> Therefore, I think, trying to know about the future is not a good idea.
 I want to ask my mind.

>>  I want to ask about my mind.

For example, my major is elementary education, but sometimes I want to study media technology.

>> Correct!

If I decide to study media, I have to take an university entrance exam again.

>> If I decide to study media, I have to take a university entrance exam again.

In this situation, how can I decide?

>> Correct!

My mind changes everyday.

>> Correct!

Therefore, I\'d like to ask real state of my mind.

>> Therefore, I\'d like to ask about the real state of my mind.

Do I really want to study media even though I should take an exam again?

>> Correct!
 It would helpful because many people don\'t know their mind truly.

>> Correct!

The crystal ball helps us listen to our mind.

>> Correct!

It means it would help us solve a difficult problem.

>> Correct! 

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