Let me summarize parts that you talked about
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Leny,
Let me summarize parts that you talked about with more research I investigated after the class.
The weather in Korea is getting hotter due to global warming.
Korea has been becoming subtropical climate like southeast Asia countries
I said that we can contribute ourselves to preventing the temperature increase of the Earth not by eating cows. The below will explain the reason to you.
Cows or Sheep called “ruminant animals” produce methane gases when they chew their cud for digestion and their waste is discharged.
That methane gas is the problem. It makes stronger greenhouse effect by 25 times than carbon dioxide(which we have considered the main factor for global warming)
According to the research, the amount of greenhouse gas from the ruminants is 50% more than the entire means of transportation produces in the world, which means “not to eat meat” is more environmentally friendly than “to drive a car”
Let's eat vegetables.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
You\'re right!
Let\'s eat vegetables rather than meat! Oh, but it\'s hard not to eat beef, you know.
Sometimes when you go to restaurants, you crave for beef as well. ^^
Thank you for this research, David!
You made an effort to research on this.
Now I know something about preserving the environment.
It is unbelievable but because it\'s proven by research then this is factual, right?^_^
Let\'t talk more in class.
You have a great afternoon!
T. Leny
Hi Leny,
>>> CORRECTLet me summarize parts that you talked about with more research I investigated after the class.
>>> Let me summarize the further research that I did after our class regarding the topic that we discussed in class.The weather in Korea is getting hotter due to global warming.
>>> CORRECTKorea has been becoming subtropical climate like southeast Asia countries
>>> Korea has become a sub-tropical country like many Southeast Asian countries.I said that we can contribute ourselves to preventing the temperature increase of the Earth not by eating cows. >>> I said that we can help prevent temperature increase of the Earth by not eating meat cows.
The below will explain the reason to you.
>>> The below statements will explain the reasons to you.
>>> Below is the explanation.
Cows or Sheep called “ruminant animals” produce methane gases when they chew their cud for digestion and their waste is discharged.
>>> Cows or sheeps are ruminant animals that produce methane gas when they chew their cud for digestion and their wastes are discharged.That methane gas is the problem.
>>> CORRECT
It makes stronger greenhouse effect by 25 times than carbon dioxide(which we have considered the main factor for global warming)
>>> It makes stronger greenhouse effect 25 times than carbon dioxide. (Which we have considered the main factor of global warming.)According to the research, the amount of greenhouse gas from the ruminants is 50% more than the entire means of transportation produces in the world, which means “not to eat meat” is more environmentally friendly than “to drive a car”
>>> CORRECTLet\'s eat vegetables.^^
>>> CORRECT
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