Let me try to review on what we talked so far.
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By starting London Olympics, I told you about the relevant events.
Korea faced its third highly controversial ruling in this Olympics. It started with Park Tae-hwan's dubious disqualification in preliminary heats in the swimming. Fortunately, the decision was subsequently overturned on appeal from the Korean delegation but still meant an anxious wait for the swimmer. Park ended up winning silver, unable to defend his Olympic title.
Then in the judo match, the referees declared Cho, Korean player, the winner but were soon summoned by the chief director of referees, and Cho was pushed down to repechage on reviewing the video.
In addition, fencer Shin A-lam failed to advance the final in the semifinal due to a timekeeping glitch. Although the judgement delegation admitted the mechanical limitations of the clock, they just decided to give a special award for her sportsmanship instead of correcting the mistaken judgement. The referees should shame on themselves.
강사 첨삭
Hello my younger brother [이름]! How are you doing at the moment? Hahaha! Anyway, you impressed me with your composition today. It is because almost all f your senteces are grammatically correct. GREAT! Your writing skill is improving! Keep it up brother! Haha! Anyway, we can talk more about this tonight. Just seat back for now and relax.
-Teacher Chloe
By starting London Olympics, I told you about the relevant events.
>>As the London Olympics started, I told you about the relevant events.Korea faced its third highly controversial ruling in this Olympics.
>>Correct
>> Korea faced its third highly controversial ruling in the Olympic games.
It started with Park Tae-hwan\'s dubious disqualification in preliminary heats in the swimming.
>> It started with Park Tae-hwan\'s dubious disqualification in the preliminary heats in the swimming.
>>It started with South Korea's Olympic and world champion Park Tae-Hwan was sensationally disqualified after winning his 400-metre freestyle heat on the opening day of the swimming competition.
Fortunately, the decision was subsequently overturned on appeal from the Korean delegation but still meant an anxious wait for the swimmer.
>>Correct
Park ended up winning silver, unable to defend his Olympic title.
>>Correct Then in the judo match, the referees declared Cho, Korean player, the winner but were soon summoned by the chief director of referees, and Cho was pushed down to repechage on reviewing the video.
>> Then in the judo match, the referees declared Cho, Korean player, the winner but were soon summoned by the chief director of referees, and Cho was pushed down to replicate on reviewing the video.In addition, fencer Shin A-lam failed to advance the final in the semifinal due to a timekeeping glitch.
>>Correct
Although the judgement delegation admitted the mechanical limitations of the clock, they just decided to give a special award for her sportsmanship instead of correcting the mistaken judgement.
>>Correct
The referees should shame on themselves.
>>Correct
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