Let me write the rest of my journey to Europe
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Q: how long have you been waiting? A: Since this morning.
2. Q: How often does the radio station play that song? A: Every hour.
3. Q: How well does your grandmother cook? A: She's the best cook in the world!
4. Q: How well do you think he knows? A: More than he admits, that's for sure.
5. Q: How long did you sleep last night? A: About six hours.
6. I told her how much she meant to me.
7. Robert didn't know how long he would stay in France.
8. My teacher was surprised at how well I had done on my exam.
9. How much money should I bring?
10.How often do you go to the cinema?
The second day of 2011, of course it is the second day of in swiss,
I got up early in the morning. and I took a shower and prepared to go outside.
Host gave us some toast, we ate a lot. (because the price of merchandise in swiss is so high.)
We started at 09:15 and we arrived East intelacken station.
Because of the sunny weather, We can go up to the Junfrau.
we bought four tickets.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
I guess it was a really nice experience for you to travel in Europe.
Please, take note of the necessary corrections that I\'ve made for you to be more familiar with this activity.
See you in class and I guess you do have a lot of stories to tell.
T. Nina^^
1. Q: how long have you been waiting? A: Since this morning.
>> B
2. Q: How often does the radio station play that song? A: Every hour.
>> correct
3. Q: How well does your grandmother cook? A: She\'s the best cook in the world!
>> B
4. Q: How well do you think he knows? A: More than he admits, that\'s for sure.
>> B
5. Q: How long did you sleep last night? A: About six hours.
>> B
6. I told her how much she meant to me.
>> correct
7. Robert didn\'t know how long he would stay in France.
>> correct
8. My teacher was surprised at how well I had done on my exam.
>> correct
9. How much money should I bring?
>> correct
10.How often do you go to the cinema?
>> correct
The second day of 2011, of course it is the second day of in swiss,
>> The second day of my travel in Swiss in 2011.
I got up early in the morning.
>> correct
and I took a shower and prepared to go outside.
>> I took a shower and prepared myself to go out.
Host gave us some toast, we ate a lot. (because the price of merchandise in swiss is so high.)
>> The host gave us some toasts and we had a lot.^^
We started at 09:15 and we arrived East intelacken station.
>> We started and arrived in the East Intelacken station at 9:15 in the morning
Because of the sunny weather, We can go up to the Junfrau.
>> Because of the sunny weather, we can go up to the Junfrau.
we bought four tickets.
>> We bought four tickets.^^
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