Let’s go to Jeju-do(island).
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Jeju-do is the best place to go on vacation in Korea. Because Jeju Island is an island, you can see the sea and it is clean. I went to Jeju-do when I was one and five years old. There are some memories left there. Seaweed from the sea was really salty.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think Jeju-do is the best place to go on vacation in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
Because Jeju Island is an island, you can see the sea and it is clean.
>>> Because Jeju Island is an island where you can see the clean sea.
I went to Jeju-do when I was one and five years old.
>>> CORRECT!
There are some memories left there.
>>> CORRECT!
Seaweed from the sea was really salty.
>>> The seaweed from the sea was really salty.
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