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2021-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Hi~ On tuesday, I will tell you why I think my body is stiff. When I do stretching, my arm is no more reach until foot. It can reach until ankle. Eventhough I do yoga for about four years, I still can\'t do that.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Please take note of the suggestions below.
There are parts that you need to keep in mind.
They are usually used in daily conversation English.
You can ask your questions in class.
Thanks!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
On tuesday, I will tell you why I think my body is stiff.
>> Last Tuesday, I told you that I will tell you why I think my body is stiff.
When I do stretching, my arm is no more reach until foot.
>> When I do stretching, my hands can\'t reach my feet.
It can reach until ankle.
>> They can only reach the ankles.
Eventhough I do yoga for about four years, I still can\'t do that.
>> Even though I have been doing yoga for about four years, I still can\'t do that.

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