Letter

Dear [Name], I'm writing this letter to inform you that I've received your pictures well. I really thank you for sending me wonderful pictures. You've sent me a lot of picteres and they reminded me of unforgetable fantastic memories in Florida. Among those pictures I really like the one that I took in the boat. As you konw, we caught dozens of snapers in the sea and I was laughing happily holding those snapers in the picture.How happy I look! I really appreciate you inviting me to your city Florida and make me have wonderful memory. I tried to send the letter as soon as I arrived here, but I realized that I have to deal with piles of work at the office. That's why I wrote letter to you so late.

Hello Miss. [Name]! You did a great job in writing this composition. I honestly think that writing is one of your strong points. Just be careful with your spelling and your articles (a, an, the). These are my corrections. Karla Dear [Name],>>correctI'm writing this letter to inform you that I've received your pictures well.>>correctI really thank you for sending me wonderful pictures. >>I really thank you for sending me these wonderful pictures. You've sent me a lot of picteres and they reminded me of unforgetable fantastic memories in Florida. >>You’ve sent me a lot of pictures and they reminded me of  the unforgettable and fantastic memories in Florida. Among those pictures I really like the one that I took in the boat. >>correct As you konw, we caught dozens of snapers in the sea and I was laughing happily holding those snapers in the picture. >>As you know, we caught dozens of snappers in the sea and I was laughing happily while holding those snappers in the picture. How happy I look! >>correctI really appreciate you inviting me to your city Florida and make me have wonderful memory.>>I really appreciate you inviting me to your city Florida and making me have wonderful memories.I tried to send the letter as soon as I arrived here, but I realized that I have to deal with piles of work at the office. >>correct That's why I wrote letter to you so late. >>correct