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We contacted the Peptron and Binex for your visit.
The Peptron, which is not ready to start conceptual design yet.
They need some more time. Just now, they are planing the new plant. So they won't be able to meet you yet.
The Binex, which knows the CDI very well. The Binex said that they take a lot of interest in meeting CDI, but they are so busy at the end of the year.
So we did not arrange with any companies.
Anyway, I will be there when you come to the Ramada Hotel.
When you arrive in Korea, give me call to [휴대전화] as you know.
I would be available at any time from Tuesday to Friday.
If I go to a business trip at that time, I come back to Cheongju at night.
May I know the purpose of this Korean trip?
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We contacted the Peptron and Binex for your visit.
>> correctThe Peptron, which is not ready to start conceptual design yet.
>> Peptron isn't ready to start the conceptual design yet.They need some more time. Just now, they are planing the new plant.
>> They need more time because at the moment, they're still planning to put up a new plant.
So they won't be able to meet you yet.>> So, they won't be able to meet you yet.The Binex, which knows the CDI very well, The Binex said that they take a lot of interest in CDI
>> Binex, knowing the CDI very well, said that they are very interested about the CDI meeting.
but they are so busy at the end of the year.
>> But they are going to be very busy at the end of the year.So we did not arrange with any companies.
>> So, we didn't have any prior arrangements with the companies.Anyway, I will be there when you come to the Ramada Hotel.
>> correctWhen you arrive in Korea, give me call to [휴대전화] as you know.
>> When you arrive in Korea, give me a call at [휴대전화].I would be available at any time from Tuesday to Friday.
>> correctIf I go to a business trip at that time, I come back to Cheongju at night.
>> Should I be in a business trip at that time, I'll be back in Cheongju in the evening.May I know the purpose of this Korean trip?
>> correct
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