Letter
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Kathrine
The weather in Korea is becoming warm. So Beautiful flowers are blooming now.
Anyway, I have something to talk with you.
First, I think we will finish our text book, Express your self soon.
So, We need to decide what class would me better for me.
My opinion is that I want to repeat this book again even though it would be boring to you. I know that you can expect my all reponses.
As you know, I have to prepare for the IELTS test this year. This content of book is very good for IELTS test. Various topic and useful expression, informative vocabulary help me improve my ability to speak.
So, If you don't mind, I'd like to review a current book again.
And second, I got a new situation now.
One of my former co-worker have a chance to work in Singapore.
By the way, He has a trouble talking with native.
When he has difficulty to explain some technical matter, He used to ask me to translate with native.
I am willing to help him and that is my pleasure.
강사 첨삭
Great evening Mr. [Name]!
Well, I\'m sorry that I did not notice that our book will soon to be finishes.
No need to worry because we have book 2.
I just forgot to tell you.
But you have to purchase Express Yourself 2 since we do not have a soft copy of it.
Express Yourself is one of the books which needed to be bought.
So if you want to then we can continue with book 2 if you were able to purchase it.
Anyway, we can also review the old book if you want to.
I don\'t mind at all.
So do not worry about it.
And I am happy that you are also learning while helping out your friend.
Good job on that.
Keep it up.
Let\'s talk more tomorrow about the use of your book.
See you!
Have a great evening!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Hello Kathrine
>> correct!
The weather in Korea is becoming warm.
>> correct!
So Beautiful flowers are blooming now.
>> correct!
Anyway, I have something to talk with you.
>> Anyway, I have something to talk to you.
First, I think we will finish our text book, Express your self soon.
>> correct!
So, We need to decide what class would me better for me.
>> correct!
My opinion is that I want to repeat this book again even though it would be boring to you.
>> My opinion is that I want to repeat this book even though it would be boring to you.
>> or: My opinion is that I want to use this book again though it would be boring to you.
I know that you can expect my all reponses.
>> correct! (responses)
As you know, I have to prepare for the IELTS test this year.
>> correct!
This content of book is very good for IELTS test.
>> The content of this book is very good for the IELTS test.
Various topic and useful expression, informative vocabulary help me improve my ability to speak.
>> correct!
So, If you don\'t mind, I\'d like to review a current book again.
>> So, if you don\'t mind, I\'d like to review the current book.
And second, I got a new situation now.
>> And one more thing, I got into a new situation now.
One of my former co-worker have a chance to work in Singapore.
>> One of my former co-worker has a chance to work in Singapore.
By the way, He has a trouble talking with native.
>> By the way, he has a trouble talking with a native.
When he has difficulty to explain some technical matter, He used to ask me to translate with native.
>> When he has difficulty to explain some technical matters, he used to ask me to translate it into the native language.
I am willing to help him and that is my pleasure.
>> I am willing to help him and it is my pleasure.
Well, I\'m sorry that I did not notice that our book will soon to be finishes.
No need to worry because we have book 2.
I just forgot to tell you.
But you have to purchase Express Yourself 2 since we do not have a soft copy of it.
Express Yourself is one of the books which needed to be bought.
So if you want to then we can continue with book 2 if you were able to purchase it.
Anyway, we can also review the old book if you want to.
I don\'t mind at all.
So do not worry about it.
And I am happy that you are also learning while helping out your friend.
Good job on that.
Keep it up.
Let\'s talk more tomorrow about the use of your book.
See you!
Have a great evening!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Hello Kathrine
>> correct!
The weather in Korea is becoming warm.
>> correct!
So Beautiful flowers are blooming now.
>> correct!
Anyway, I have something to talk with you.
>> Anyway, I have something to talk to you.
First, I think we will finish our text book, Express your self soon.
>> correct!
So, We need to decide what class would me better for me.
>> correct!
My opinion is that I want to repeat this book again even though it would be boring to you.
>> My opinion is that I want to repeat this book even though it would be boring to you.
>> or: My opinion is that I want to use this book again though it would be boring to you.
I know that you can expect my all reponses.
>> correct! (responses)
As you know, I have to prepare for the IELTS test this year.
>> correct!
This content of book is very good for IELTS test.
>> The content of this book is very good for the IELTS test.
Various topic and useful expression, informative vocabulary help me improve my ability to speak.
>> correct!
So, If you don\'t mind, I\'d like to review a current book again.
>> So, if you don\'t mind, I\'d like to review the current book.
And second, I got a new situation now.
>> And one more thing, I got into a new situation now.
One of my former co-worker have a chance to work in Singapore.
>> One of my former co-worker has a chance to work in Singapore.
By the way, He has a trouble talking with native.
>> By the way, he has a trouble talking with a native.
When he has difficulty to explain some technical matter, He used to ask me to translate with native.
>> When he has difficulty to explain some technical matters, he used to ask me to translate it into the native language.
I am willing to help him and that is my pleasure.
>> I am willing to help him and it is my pleasure.
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