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Through conversation with native speaker, I can have a chance to practice speaking English and I have to study about elevator in English.
So, May I ask for correction. ^^~~
Your correction will be greatly helpful.
Sincerely
Hello, Let me explain what is the problem.
The main problem is caused from MCU pcb. The MCU's main faction is to controll the power of elevator's movement.
It commend the inverter specific amount of voltage that are needed to move.
Contact inferiority.
He said the contact point between PCB and main machine was not good.
He suspect if bad contact point caused these problems.
He took some temporary measures. But if these phenomenon will occur again, Some material should be replaced.
Safety switches.
There are various safety switches is the elevator.
By the way, A certain safety switch is malfunction now.
So, He said, He got rid of a certain switch.
But don't worry about that, That is not serious problem.
That is just minor matter.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again Mr. [Name]!
I hope that I would be able to help you with these.
Just tell me if I misunderstood some words or sentences here.
See you then tomorrow!
Thanks a lot!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Through conversation with native speaker, I can have a chance to practice speaking English and I have to study about elevator in English.
>> Through a conversation with a native speaker, I can have the chance to practice speaking in English and I have to study about elevator in English.
So, May I ask for correction. ^^~~
>> So may I ask for some corrections.
Your correction will be greatly helpful.
>> Your correction will be a grateful help.
Sincerely
>> Sincerely.
Hello, Let me explain what is the problem.
>> Hello, let me explain what the problem is.
The main problem is caused from MCU pcb.
>> The main problem is caused by the MCU pcb.
The MCU\'s main faction is to controll the power of elevator\'s movement.
>> The MCU\'s main function is to control the power of the elevator\'s movement.
It commend the inverter specific amount of voltage that are needed to move.
>> It commands the inverter an specific amount of voltage which is needed to move.
Contact inferiority.
>> correct!
He said the contact point between PCB and main machine was not good.
>> He said that the contact point between PCB and main machine was not good.
He suspect if bad contact point caused these problems.
>> He suspects that a bad contact point caused these problems.
He took some temporary measures.
>> correct!
But if these phenomenon will occur again, Some material should be replaced.
>> But if this phenomenon will occur again, some materials should be replaced.
Safety switches.
>> correct!
There are various safety switches is the elevator.
>> There are various safety switches in the elevator.
By the way, A certain safety switch is malfunction now.
>> By the way, a certain safety switch is malfunctioning now.
So, He said, He got rid of a certain switch.
>> So he said that he got rid of a certain switch.
But don\'t worry about that, That is not serious problem.
>> But do not worry about it since it is not a serious problem.
That is just minor matter.
>> It is just a minor matter.
I hope that I would be able to help you with these.
Just tell me if I misunderstood some words or sentences here.
See you then tomorrow!
Thanks a lot!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Through conversation with native speaker, I can have a chance to practice speaking English and I have to study about elevator in English.
>> Through a conversation with a native speaker, I can have the chance to practice speaking in English and I have to study about elevator in English.
So, May I ask for correction. ^^~~
>> So may I ask for some corrections.
Your correction will be greatly helpful.
>> Your correction will be a grateful help.
Sincerely
>> Sincerely.
Hello, Let me explain what is the problem.
>> Hello, let me explain what the problem is.
The main problem is caused from MCU pcb.
>> The main problem is caused by the MCU pcb.
The MCU\'s main faction is to controll the power of elevator\'s movement.
>> The MCU\'s main function is to control the power of the elevator\'s movement.
It commend the inverter specific amount of voltage that are needed to move.
>> It commands the inverter an specific amount of voltage which is needed to move.
Contact inferiority.
>> correct!
He said the contact point between PCB and main machine was not good.
>> He said that the contact point between PCB and main machine was not good.
He suspect if bad contact point caused these problems.
>> He suspects that a bad contact point caused these problems.
He took some temporary measures.
>> correct!
But if these phenomenon will occur again, Some material should be replaced.
>> But if this phenomenon will occur again, some materials should be replaced.
Safety switches.
>> correct!
There are various safety switches is the elevator.
>> There are various safety switches in the elevator.
By the way, A certain safety switch is malfunction now.
>> By the way, a certain safety switch is malfunctioning now.
So, He said, He got rid of a certain switch.
>> So he said that he got rid of a certain switch.
But don\'t worry about that, That is not serious problem.
>> But do not worry about it since it is not a serious problem.
That is just minor matter.
>> It is just a minor matter.
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