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2016-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

It’s a wonderful Wednesday. I hope that God bless you more and raise your level of expectancy. Because God usually meets at our level of expectancy. I had a conversation with the phone English manager to expand our class time. Then minute is too short for us. First time when I started this class maybe 3 years ago, I had a difficulty to speak in English for ten minute because of my poor English. But the situation has been changed now. I thing that I became talkative man. Anyway, the manager said that it seems to be difficult to expand your class time until finishing your registered current class or else you need to change class time or your teacher. So, I answered “Ok, I understand what you are saying. I am going to wait for the change the current situation or the end of my registered current class” So, the extension of my class time seems to be a little difficult. Anyway, I posted my dairy and my expression that I want to describe in English again.

강사 첨삭

It’s a wonderful Wednesday. >> CORRECT! OR >> Today is a wonderful Wednesday.I hope that God bless you more and raise your level of expectancy. >> I hope that God blesses you more and raises your level of expectancy.Because God usually meets at our level of expectancy. >> It\'s because God usually meets our level of expectancy. OR >> I know that God usually meets our level of expectancy.I had a conversation with the phone English manager to expand our class time. >> I had a conversation with the phone English manager to lengthen our class time. OR >> I had a conversation with the phone English manager to extend our class time. Then minute is too short for us. >> Our class time is too short for us. First time when I started this class maybe 3 years ago, I had a difficulty to speak in English for ten minute because of my poor English. >> When I started this class maybe 3 years ago, I had a difficulty to speak in English for ten minutes because of my poor English. OR >> The first time I started this class, maybe 3 years ago, I had a difficulty to speak in English for ten minutes because of my poor English. But the situation has been changed now. >> CORRECT! OR >> But the situation has changed now. I thing that I became talkative man. >> I think that I became a talkative man. OR >> I think I became a more expressive man. Anyway, the manager said that it seems to be difficult to expand your class time until finishing your registered current class or else you need to change class time or your teacher. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Anyway, the manager said that it seems to be difficult to extend my class time until the end of the currently registered class. I was told that if I want to extend I might need to change the class time or my teacher. So, I answered “Ok, I understand what you are saying. I am going to wait for the change the current situation or the end of my registered current class” >> So, I answered “Ok, I understand what you are saying. I am going to wait for the current situation to change or wait for my registered classes to end.”So, the extension of my class time seems to be a little difficult. >> CORRECT! OR >> So extending my class time seems to be a little difficult.Anyway, I posted my dairy and my expression that I want to describe in English again. >> CORRECT! OR >> Anyway, I posted my dairy and the expressions that I want to say in English again.

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