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Good afternoon [이름] [이름]!

How are you?

I checked your letter as soon as I could. I\'m not sure when you\'re supposed to send it to Dr. [Name], but I\'m hoping it\'s not before our class tonight because I need to clarify some details with you first. I\'m not really familiar with most of the medical terms you used. Should you need to send it before our class tonight, please disregard any changes that I made which you deemed unnecessary or incorrect. 

Thank you, 

Amanda ^-^  

Dear [Name]. [Name],

Thank you for allowing me to visit and offering good suggestions.
>> Correct 
I would like to visit your laboratory for three months starting June 1st.
>> Correct
I will check which visa type is proper.
>> Correct
>> OR: I will check which visa is proper for me to use.

To study hairy melanocytic nevi would be helpful to understand the biology of hair cells and melanocytes.
>> Studying hairy melanocytic nevi would be helpful to understand the biology of hair cells and melanocytes.
>> OR: It would be helpful to study hairy melanocytic nevi to understand the biology of hair cells and melanocytes.
 

Maybe I think I can find several paraffinized punch biopsy specimen of hairy melanocytic nevi in my hospital.
>> I might be able to find several paraffinized punch biopsy specimen of hairy melanocytic nevi in my hospital.

Most of skin specimen is 3-4mm size punch biopsied specimen.
 >> Most of the skin specimens are 3-4mm in size punch biopsied specimen.
>> Most of the punch biopsied specimens are 3-4 in size.

***NOTE: I\'m not really familiar with the medical terms you used in this sentence, so my correction is not final. Please disregard my correction if it changes the whole idea.

I would be able to extract DNA from the paraffinized tissue here and bring them to your lab.

> Correct

I have been interested in the pathogenesis of keloid and skin fibro proliferative disorders and have collected specimens.
>> correct

Recently, I used out all of them in my experiment, so I think collecting enough scar specimen before the visit might be difficult as well as normal facial skin. Instead, I found some lesional and nonlesional specimen from several patients with morphea (localized form of scleroderma).
>> Correct 

I think it would be valuable to analyze and to compare lesional and nonlesional expression of DNA and RNA to understand the pathogenesis of morphea.

>> I think it would be valuable to analyze and compare lesional and nonlesional expression of DNA and RNA to understand the pathogenesis of morphea.

For getting fresh tissues for cell culture, I have to newly collect them according to the purpose of the studies and I need more about the protocol including more detailed purpose. 
 >> I have to collect fresh tissues for cell culture that would meet the requirement of the study. I also need to know more about the protocol including its more detailed purpose.

***NOTE: I\'m not really familiar with the medical terms you used in this sentence, so my correction is not final. Please disregard my correction if it changes the whole idea.

I need to hurry up to get approval from the IRB first to collect the specimen on time.
>> Correct

If you kindly tell Dr. [Name] Won about my participation, I will contact and ask him to help me.
>> If you will kindly tell Dr. [Name] Won about my participation, I will contact and ask him to help me.

Thank you for reading the long article.

Have a lovely day!

Best regards,

[이름] 

Dear [Name]. [Name],

Thank you for allowing me to visit and offering good suggestions.

I would like to visit your laboratory for three months starting June 1st.I will check which visa is proper for me to use.

Studying hairy melanocytic nevi would be helpful to understand the biology of hair cells and melanocytes. I might be able to find several paraffinized punch biopsy specimen of hairy melanocytic nevi in my hospital. Most of the punch biopsied specimens are 3-4mm in size. I would be able to extract DNA from the paraffinized tissue here and bring them to your lab. I have been interested in the pathogenesis of keloid and skin fibro proliferative disorders and have collected specimens. Recently, I used all of them in my experiment, so I think collecting enough scar specimen before the visit might be difficult as well as normal facial skin. Instead, I found some lesional and nonlesional specimen from several patients with morphea (localized form of scleroderma).I think it would be valuable to analyze and compare lesional and nonlesional expression of DNA and RNA to understand the pathogenesis of morphea. I have to collect fresh tissues for cell culture that would meet the requirement of the study. I also need to know more about the protocols including the more detailed purpose of the study.

I need to hurry up to get approval from the IRB first to collect the specimen on time. If you will kindly tell Dr. [Name] Won about my participation, I will contact and ask him to help me.

Thank you for reading the long article.

Have a lovely day!

Best regards,

[이름]