Letting in the Morning sun ensures sound sleep at night

2019-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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1. Do you get enough sleep? If not, what stops you from sleeping enough? Most of the night, I have a sound sleep, but sometimes not. When I didn\'t make a good sleep on specific night, there must get some problems or concerns during a daytime. 2. Have you ever used medicine, tea, or something else to help you fall asleep? Yes I did. I have my special method for fall asleep when I cannot make a sleep. Sometimes when I was caught on complex thinking and mind, I just concentrate on totally different and very simple think such as \"black ball\". Most of case, that is working but sometimes not. 3. Have you ever suffered from insomnia? If so, how severe was it, and how did you deal with it? Yes I also did. When I was young, as I confronted such a big exam, I got so nervous and cannot asleep all night. At that time, I don\'t have any method and cannot think any solution about that. I Just confront it as it is and suffered so hard time.

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1. Do you get enough sleep? If not, what stops you from sleeping enough?
Most of the night, I have a sound sleep, but sometimes not.

>> I am sound a sleep every night. But, sometimes not. 


When I didn\'t make a good sleep on specific night, there must get some problems or concerns during a daytime.

>> there must get some problems or concerns during a daytime whenever I didn\'t make a good night\'s sleep on a specific night.


 2. Have you ever used medicine, tea, or something else to help you fall asleep?
Yes I did. I have my special method for fall asleep when I cannot make a sleep.

>> Yes I did. I have my special method for falling asleep whenever I cannot sleep.


Sometimes when I was caught on complex thinking and mind, I just concentrate on totally different and very simple think such as \"black ball\".

>> Sometimes, whenever I caught myself thinking of a complex situation. I just concentrate on a totally different and a very simple thing such as a black ball.


Most of case, that is working but sometimes not.

>> CORRECT


 3. Have you ever suffered from insomnia? If so, how severe was it, and how did you deal with it?
Yes I also did. When I was young, as I confronted such a big exam, I got so nervous and cannot asleep all night.

>> Yes I also did. When I was young, as I was confronted by such a big examination period, I got so nervous and I cannot asleep all night.


At that time, I don\'t have any method and cannot think any solution about that.

>> I don\'t have any method and cannot think any solution to fix it at that time.


I Just confront it as it is and suffered so hard time.

>> I just confronted it as it is and I suffered with such a hard time.

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