Licenses
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I have ever read the newspapers about the difficulties of company managers.
They hired young people who graduated engineering colleges.
Although they had many certificates anf licenses but they didn\'t have practical ablility in the field of their majors.
The reason is that we regard as important fators the score and licebse that we can see.
We live in a society that makes each other hard and contest.
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I have ever read the newspapers about the difficulties of company managers.
>>> I have ever read the on the newspaper about the difficulties of company managers.
They hired young people who graduated engineering colleges.
They hired young people who graduated engineering colleges.
>>> They hired young people who graduated from engineering colleges.
Although they had many certificates anf licenses but they didn\'t have practical ablility in the field of their majors.
Although they had many certificates anf licenses but they didn\'t have practical ablility in the field of their majors.
>>> Although they had many certificates and licenses but they don\'t have a practical ability in the field of their majors
>>> Although they acquire different certificates and licenses, they still don\'t have a practical ability that can be useful in their field of specialization.
The reason is that we regard as important fators the score and licebse that we can see.
The reason is that we regard as important fators the score and licebse that we can see.
>>>The reason is that we regard scores and licenses as important factors.
We live in a society that makes each other hard and contest.
>>> We live in a society that makes hard for other to compete.
>>> We are living in a society that makes each other compete
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