life expectancy
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It is not always good to mankind that life expectancy is longer than past.
It is more important healthy and human life than old age with disease. to us.
Sometimes too a long span make us unhappy and occur conflicts between families.
Our children don\'t want to support any more like we take care of our parents.
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It is not always good to mankind that life expectancy is longer than past.
>>> CORRECT
It is more important healthy and human life than old age with disease. to us.
>>> For us, health is more important than living in an old age with a disease.
Sometimes too, a long span make us unhappy and occur conflicts between families.
>>> CORRECT
Our children don\'t want to support any more like we take care of our parents.
Sometimes too, a long span make us unhappy and occur conflicts between families.
>>> CORRECT
Our children don\'t want to support any more like we take care of our parents.
>>> Our children don\'t want to support any more like they have to take care of their parents.
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