Life is like a dream?

2014-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I agree with the idea that life is like a dream. Looking back on the old days, I feel like it was a moment although I‘ve lived for many decades. I have experienced a lot of hardships, endured pain and also achieved things during the past years, it was just like a dream. Time passed so fast. There is a famous Korean poet who wrote a poem reading “life is like going on a picnic.” In the universe, we were born and we will disappear after living only for 70 to 80 years. A hundred years is just a moment considering billions and billions years of the universe. We just came here ( here means life ) for a picnic. Life is wonderful although we might have ups and downs. Our picnic won’t last forever. It will end soon. Life is the same as a picnic. It is exciting, cheerful and cherish, but the time will come soon that we should pack our stuff and leave from the sage. What is life and death? Is it like a picnic where we go up a mountain and come down with an empty lunch box?

강사 첨삭

A perfect composition Sir [이름]!Thanks for your time. ^^ I admire your sentences today. Life is really great. ^_^ We should be grateful for the things we have and learn. You are right, time flies fast and we should makes our lives worthwhile. Talk to you soon.Teacher Nina   I agree with the idea that life is like a dream. >> Correct Looking back on the old days, I feel like it was a moment although I‘ve lived for many decades. >> Correct I have experienced a lot of hardships, endured pain and also achieved things during the past years, it was just like a dream. >> Correct Time passed so fast. >> Correct There is a famous Korean poet who wrote a poem reading “life is like going on a picnic.” >> Correct In the universe, we were born and we will disappear after living only for 70 to 80 years. >> Correct >> OR: In the universe, we were born and we will diappear after living for seventy to eighty years.  A hundred years is just a moment considering billions and billions years of the universe. >> Correct We just came here ( here means life ) for a picnic. >> Correct Life is wonderful although we might have ups and downs. >> Correct Our picnic won’t last forever. >> Correct It will end soon. >> Correct Life is the same as a picnic. >> Correct It is exciting, cheerful and cherish, but the time will come soon that we should pack our stuff and leave from the sage. >> Correct What is life and death? >> Correct Is it like a picnic where we go up a mountain and come down with an empty lunch box? >> Correct

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