Life is not like a dream.

2018-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I heard someone saying "life is like a dream". But actually, I don't agree with that. during our life time, we already met so many situations that make us frustrated and we'll have to deal with other painfull experiences. So, real life isn't like a dream that always make us happy. of course, there is so many situations that like a dream. But I think that we can get a happiness when we overcome our pain or unhappy experiences. life doesn't bring happiness to us for free. A dream is just a dream.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jun!

I like how you express your thoughts.

You do it in such an original way that I really enjoy reading.

Keep up the good work!

I\'ll see you in class!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I heard someone saying \"life is like a dream\".

>> I heard someone saying that \"Life is like a dream\".

But actually, I don\'t agree with that.

>> Correct

during our life time, we already met so many situations that make us frustrated and we\'ll have to deal with other painfull experiences.

>> During our lifetime, we already meet so many situations that make us frustrated and we\'ll have to deal with different painful experiences.

So, real life isn\'t like a dream that always make us happy.

>> So, real life isn\'t like a dream that always makes us happy.

of course, there is so many situations that like a dream.

>> Of course, there are so many situations that are like dreams.

But I think that we can get a happiness when we overcome our pain or unhappy experiences.

>> But I think that we can get happiness when we overcome our pain or unhappy experiences.

life doesn\'t bring happiness to us for free.

>> Life doesn\'t bring happiness to us for free.

A dream is just a dream.

>> Correct

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