Life is not like a dream.
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Hi Jun!
I like how you express your thoughts.
You do it in such an original way that I really enjoy reading.
Keep up the good work!
I\'ll see you in class!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I heard someone saying \"life is like a dream\".
>> I heard someone saying that \"Life is like a dream\".
But actually, I don\'t agree with that.
>> Correct
during our life time, we already met so many situations that make us frustrated and we\'ll have to deal with other painfull experiences.
>> During our lifetime, we already meet so many situations that make us frustrated and we\'ll have to deal with different painful experiences.
So, real life isn\'t like a dream that always make us happy.
>> So, real life isn\'t like a dream that always makes us happy.
of course, there is so many situations that like a dream.
>> Of course, there are so many situations that are like dreams.
But I think that we can get a happiness when we overcome our pain or unhappy experiences.
>> But I think that we can get happiness when we overcome our pain or unhappy experiences.
life doesn\'t bring happiness to us for free.
>> Life doesn\'t bring happiness to us for free.
A dream is just a dream.
>> Correct
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