Life is not stressful as same as old days.
학생이 쓴 원문
Life in Korea is not stressful for me.
Stressful things are rarely happen to me these days.
My music skills are getting better so I am happy.
So many fun things makes me pleasant such as computer games.
The recent apps which smart phone offers are more useful to study and play.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night. ☺
Life in Korea is not stressful for me.
>> CORRECT
Stressful things are rarely happen to me these days.
>> Stressful things rarely happen to me these days.
My music skills are getting better so I am happy.
>> CORRECT
So many fun things makes me pleasant such as computer games.
>> So many fun things make me pleasant such as computer games.
The recent apps which smart phone offers are more useful to study and play.
>> The recent apps which smart phones offer are more useful for studying and playing.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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