Life is short only to be happy everyday

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I agree the quote.

>>I agree to this quote.

There are lots of studies that we smile happily, we can live more.

>>There are lots of studies which tell us that if we smile always, we\'ll live longer.

Because hormone in our body affect blood, brain, and the whole body.

>>Because the hormones in our body will be affected including the blood and the brain.

The same way if we are angry often, we could live less. 

>>The same happens when we\'re angry, we tend to live less.
 I think that how people feel is kind of a habit.

>>The way we feel depend on how we start our day.

The person who are often feeling happy tends to be optimistic, get better well, be going to be happy.

>>The person who is often happy tends to be optimistic, gets better well, and stays happy even if he or she has problems.

So we practice to be happy rather than angry.

>>So we should practice to be happy all the time rather than be angry.

Then we can live long and continue to be happy.

>>Then we can live longer and we will be happy always.