Life of pets
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NO, they deserve life of freedom. They live with humen.
>> No, they deserve a life with freedom, even though they live with humans.
They have bond with us. They have faith in us.
>> CORRECT!
Imagine your parents walk with you with collar, that is just so horrible.
>> Imagine your parents walk you with a collar, that is just so horrible.
Though wihout collar, there would be some difficulties.
>> CORRECT!
Like they could bite people or bark loudly, or terrify who is afraid with dogs, for example.
>> For example, they could bite people or bark loudly, or terrify people who are afraid with dogs.
But we should remember that pets are not having their life for humen, they are having their own life, they also have rights to be happy.
>> But we should remember that pets don\'t live for humans, they have their own lives and they also have rights to be happy.
If we subordinate even a single mule, then after all, we not so much different from them.
>> If we subordinate even a single mule, then we are not so much different from them.
Actually, we are much more lowly than them.
>> CORRECT!
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