Life of rich and poor?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think so. Because the rich can make one big mistake and lose everything, and the poor can make one big mistake and make money. But not everyone is like that. Things that affect my life have to do with me. Depending on how they get through the crisis, they will be rich or poor.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I don\'t think so.
>>> CORRECT!
Because the rich can make one big mistake and lose everything, and the poor can make one big mistake and make money.
>>> CORRECT!
But not everyone is like that.
>>> CORRECT!
Things that affect my life have to do with me.
>>> CORRECT!
Depending on how they get through the crisis, they will be rich or poor.
>>> CORRECT!
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