life style

Actally I was born in countryside. So I got used to living at the slower pace. But nowadays most people are always in a hurry. So I can't avoid following them in competition. So in my opinion, when I have physical strength, It is betterto live in a hurry. If I do that, I can earn much money and learn efficiency. After then, when I am getting old, I want to liveatn a slower pace. I think living slowly needs some money. That is why I live in a hurry. If I have some money, I am across the board. So when I am youth, Ilive in a hurry, When I am older, I live slowly. I want to live in both of styles.

Hello there [이름], Happy first day of the week! I hope you are having a great Monday. Thank you for doing your homework. Be careful with your articles and spelling. Nevertheless, you did a good job in this composition. See you later! ~ T. Giselle ^^   Actally I was born in countryside. >> Actually, I was born in the countryside.So I got used to living at the slower pace. >> So I got used to living at a slower pace.But nowadays most people are always in a hurry. >> Correct!So I can\'t avoid following them in competition.>> Correct! So in my opinion, when I have physical strength,It is betterto live in a hurry. >> Correct! >> So in my opinion, if I am strong, it is better to live in a hurry.If I do that, I can earn much money and learn efficiency. >> If I do that, I can earn much money and learn effienciently.After then, when I am getting old, I want to liveatn a slower pace.>> Correct!I think living slowly needs some money. >> Correct!That is why I live in a hurry. >> Correct!If I have some money, I am across the board.>> If I have saved enough money, I can go across the board.So when I am youth, Ilive in a hurry, >> So while I am young, I will live in a hurry.When I am older, I live slowly.>> When I am older, I will live slowly.I want to live in both of styles. >> I want to live in both styles.