Life without friends
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If I\'m alone all of my life, I think it\'ll be very lonely. Though In elementary school, friends are just playing friends. However, I can meet real friends(not best friends) at middle school. I can talk about my secrets or my life, and I can be sympathized by the real friends. So I think the real friends are very important to my life. However, perhaps, life without friends might have advantages. For examples, I can have meditating times a lot. And, I can invest to myself.
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If I\'m alone all of my life, I think it\'ll be very lonely.
>> If I were alone all my life, I think it would be very lonely.
Though In elementary school, friends are just playing friends.
> > In elementary, friends are just playmates.
However, I can meet real friends(not best friends) at middle school.
>> However, I can meet real friends (not best friends) in middle school.
I can talk about my secrets or my life, and I can be sympathized by the real friends.
>> I can talk about my secrets or my life, and my real friends can sympathize with me.
So I think the real friends are very important to my life.
>> So I think real friends are very important in my life.
However, perhaps, life without friends might have advantages.
>> However, a life without friends might have advantages.
For examples, I can have meditating times a lot.
>> For example, I can meditate a lot.
And, I can invest to myself.
>> And I can invest in myself.
Hello, Daniel! I hope you find true friends. And when you do, please take care of them.
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