Life without lesson is boring.

2013-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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How is it going? Wendy. I have been spending such a boring day. It is so quite in the office and I am just looking at the moniter with losing my mind. I feel weird to sit on a chair without doing anything sepcially no one sends me e-mail to request some materials or ask me do something. I suppose I don't know how to enjoy my spare time. I need some exciting things... Let's talk about the homework. My great memory lt was the most happiest day I felt when I was rewarded with my first paycheck. As we konw, Having money to spend is such a wonderful thing. Starting independant from parents' economic support. Sometimes I can give my parents to some allowance and buy my favorite items etc. Earning money means we have an ability to live by ourselves and we deserve to enjoy our life, becasue we work hard. I still keep in mind that day I got the first salary. Have a great day. [이름].

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I enjoyed reading your composition. How are you? I feel sad not being able to talk to you today. I love listening to your stories. How was your day? Do you still feel bored? When I\'m bored, I listen to English music. Sometimes, I read comic books or novels. I really love funny stories. Maybe you can try doing that too? :) I hope to talk to you again tomorrow! Lovelots! -----T. WENDY ^^ How is it going? >>CORRECT Wendy. >>CORRECTI have been spending such a boring day. >>CORRECT It is so quite in the office and I am just looking at the moniter with losing my mind. >>It\'s quiet here in the office and I\'m just looking at the monitor losing my mind.I feel weird to sit on a chair without doing anything sepcially no one sends me e-mail to request some materials or ask me do something. >> I feel weird sitting on a chair without doing anything specially when no one sends me e-mails to request some materials or ask me to do something. I suppose I don\'t know how to enjoy my spare time. >>CORRECT I need some exciting things... >>CORRECTLet\'s talk about the homework. >>CORRECTMy great memory >>CORRECTlt was the most happiest day I felt when I was rewarded with my first paycheck.  >>It was the happiest day I felt when I was rewarded with my first paycheck. ( Using most and happiest in one sentene is redundant. Happiest is the correct word. ^^ )As we konw, Having money to spend is such a wonderful thing. >>As we know, having money to spend is such a wonderful thing. Starting independant from parents\' economic support. >>Being independent from my parents economic support. Sometimes I can give my parents to some allowance and buy my favorite items etc. >>Sometimes, I give my parents allowance and buy my favorite items etc. Earning money means we have an ability to live by ourselves and we deserve to enjoy our life, becasue we work hard. >>CORRECT I still keep in mind that day I got the first salary. >>I still remember the day when I got my first salary.Have a great day. >>CORRECT [이름]. >>CORRECT

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