Life without music…
학생이 쓴 원문
Life without music would be bleak. It\'s because music can empower so many people, change so many people\'s moods, and so many people have music as a profession. And as a music lover, my life would be boring without music in this world.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Life without music would be bleak.
>>> CORRECT!
It\'s because music can empower so many people, change so many people\'s moods, and so many people have music as a profession.
>>> CORRECT!
And as a music lover, my life would be boring without music in this world.
>>> CORRECT!
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