Life without the Internet
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays, we can\'t imagine the life without the Internet. With the Internet, we can communicate with most of our friends and acquaintances, watch all the news around the world in real time . We can also deal with everything relating to the business and financial affairs. As for me, I send my staff\'s wages on line every month. Actually I can\'t give up the convenience of Internet. Of course we managed to lead our lives without Internet a few decades ago. But nowadays we are used to the life with Internet, we cannot imagine the life without it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree with you! Yes, maybe we can still live without the internet, but it would feel really inconvenient and uncomfortable. Even for me, not having the internet makes me wonder what to do. It’s just nice that your generation and mine both experienced the time when there was no internet and the time after it was developed.
- T. Caitlyn
Nowadays, we can\'t imagine the life without the Internet.
>> Nowadays, we can\'t imagine life without the Internet.
With the Internet, we can communicate with most of our friends and acquaintances, watch all the news around the world in real time .
>> With the Internet, we can communicate with most of our friends and acquaintances and watch news from around the world in real time.
We can also deal with everything relating to the business and financial affairs.
>> We can also handle everything related to business and financial affairs.
As for me, I send my staff\'s wages on line every month.
>> As for me, I send my staff\'s wages online every month.
Actually I can\'t give up the convenience of Internet.
>> Actually, I can\'t give up the convenience of the Internet.
Of course we managed to lead our lives without Internet a few decades ago.
>> Of course, we managed to live without the Internet a few decades ago.
But nowadays we are used to the life with Internet, we cannot imagine the life without it.
>> But nowadays, we are used to life with the Internet, and we cannot imagine life without it.
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