Like home
학생이 쓴 원문
Originally I don\'t have a place completly to feel home.
But, particular atmosphier makes me to stay at home.
It is that morning without alram, spending time for me without worry of future and a sense of duty to do something.
Now, I live in domitory. So, If I get vacation and go to my home, I feel very comfortable and relaxed.
강사 첨삭
Hi Soo An!
That\'s good work you just made there.
The statements you chose were simple and clear.
This is the kind of work I expect from you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Originally I don\'t have a place completly to feel home.
>> Originally, I didn\'t have a place where I could completely feel at home.
But, particular atmosphier makes me to stay at home.
>> However, a particular atmosphere makes me feel at home.
It is that morning without alram, spending time for me without worry of future and a sense of duty to do something.
It is that morning without alram, spending time for me without worry of future and a sense of duty to do something.
>> It\'s those mornings without an alarm, spending time for myself without worrying about the future or a sense of duty to do something.
Now, I live in domitory.
Now, I live in domitory.
>> Now, I live in a dormitory.
So, If I get vacation and go to my home, I feel very comfortable and relaxed.
>> So, when I get a vacation and go home, I feel very comfortable and relaxed.
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