Lina~!

2010-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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Thank you for your help and words that makse me hopeful. Yes! you are right! i'm sure i can do this! kkk So i really hope to be overseas sales person, the reason is it is my dream and makes me passionate to do business with foreign people. and did you ask me what are you going to do in five years? i think i'm working at some company that is my job of dream and i will be communicating with foreign people or overseas buyer. Or i'm leaving with my person who is i love or Lixx? ha joke~k yeap it was alwyas great talking with you! my best friend! see you [이름]orrow~!! :)

강사 첨삭

I'm teary-eyed while reading this writing of yours [이름].I didn't know that you are human and can make this sweet message.I really believe in your ability.I know you will achieve all of your dreams including to be with the person you love.(ME?)kkkk.Yes,Definitely you're my bestfriend.(Dog is man's bestfriend)kkk kidding!It's been a pleasure to talk to you [이름].Always.I'm sorry if I cut our conversation early because right after your class I have a class to attend to.I hate it.I want to talk to you for hours..kkk.But it's impossible.Have a great evening.Talk to you [이름]orrow. LINA Thank you for your help and words that makse me hopeful. >>Thank you for your helpand words of encouragement that makes me hopeful.Yes! you are right! i'm sure i can do this! kkk >correct!!So i really hope to be overseas sales person, the reason is it is my >>"Correct"An overseas.... dream and makes me passionate to do business with foreign people. >>Correct!!and did you ask me what are you going to do in five years? >>Correct!! >>Or What will you be in five years?i think i'm working at some company that is my job of dream and i will >>Correct!!be communicating with foreign people or overseas buyer. >>Correct!! Or i'm leaving with my person who is i love or Lixx? ha joke~k >>Or I'm living with the person I love of lixx?..what is lixx?yeap it was alwyas great talking with you! my best friend! >>Correct!!see you [이름]orrow~!! :) >>Correct!!

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