Lina~~hi

2010-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sally

학생이 쓴 원문

hi! Lina~ I'm [이름]. how are you? I think this is firtst time that write a letter for you. today in the morning, my close friends contacted to me, and they asked me how about meeting today? because this month is last month in this year, and we have been not meet for a long time. so I postpone our class sadly. so sorry... and please have a great weekend! today is friday night!! sounds great!! rignt? hehehe see you next monday Lina! bye~~

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you so much for sending the composition. Always keep in touch with your teacher. Anyway, always remember to capitalize the beginning letter of your sentences. Lina~~hi >>Hi Lina! hi! Lina~ >>Hi Lina!I'm [이름]. >>I’m [이름]. >>My name is [이름]. how are you? >>How are you?I think this is firtst time that write a letter for you. >>I think this is my first time to write you a letter.today in the morning, my close friends contacted to me, and theyasked me how about meeting today? >>This morning, my friends contacted me and they sked me if “How about meeting today?”. because this month is last month in this year, and we have been not meet for a long time. >>This month is the last month of the year and we have not met in a long time.so I postpone our class sadly >>So, I postponed our class. so sorry...and please have a great weekend! >>I am so sorry. Please have a great weekend. today is friday night!! >>It’s a Firday night later.sounds great!! rignt? Hehehe >>It sounds great right? He-he-he!see you next monday Lina! >See you next Monday Lina. Bye~ >>Bye!

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