LINA~~ hi
학생이 쓴 원문
hi LINA?
how are you? hahaha I'm really fine, and good. cause today is children day!! In my office, there are only young peaple. So I play game, and reading a cartoons that about a cuty animals. kkk
after work, I gotta go to meeting my boyfriend. so I clicked the button to hold off my class. sorry for that....
how was your cumputer? Is it fixed?
see u, next monday. and have a good weekend.
I miss you!!
byebye
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It’s great that you will be enjoying your day! I hope that you wil be able to share it with me the next time we speak to each other. Take care! I miss you, too! ^_^
LINA~~ hi
>> Hi Lina!
hi LINA?
>> Hi Lina!how are you?
>> How are you?
hahaha I'm really fine, and good.
>> I’m fine and I feel good.
cause today is children day!!
>> Today is Children’s Day!
In my office, there are only young peaple.
>> In my office, there are only young people.
So I play game, and reading a cartoons that about a cuty animals. Kkk
>> So I play games and read cartoon books with cute animals on it.
after work, I gotta go to meeting my boyfriend.
>> After work, I’m meeting up with my boyfriend.
so I clicked the button to hold off my class.
>> So I have to put the class on hold.
sorry for that....
>> I’m sorry for thathow was your cumputer? Is it fixed?
>> How was your computer? Is it fixed yet?see u, next monday. and have a good weekend.
>> See you next Monday and have a good weekend.I miss you!!
>> Correctbyebye
>> Bye!
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