LINA~~ hi

2011-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

hi LINA? how are you? hahaha I'm really fine, and good. cause today is children day!! In my office, there are only young peaple. So I play game, and reading a cartoons that about a cuty animals. kkk after work, I gotta go to meeting my boyfriend. so I clicked the button to hold off my class. sorry for that.... how was your cumputer? Is it fixed? see u, next monday. and have a good weekend. I miss you!! byebye

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It’s great that you will be enjoying your day! I hope that you wil be able to share it with me the next time we speak to each other. Take care! I miss you, too! ^_^   LINA~~ hi >> Hi Lina! hi LINA? >> Hi Lina!how are you? >> How are you? hahaha I'm really fine, and good. >> I’m fine and I feel good. cause today is children day!! >> Today is Children’s Day! In my office, there are only young peaple. >> In my office, there are only young people. So I play game, and reading a cartoons that about a cuty animals. Kkk >> So I play games and read cartoon books with cute animals on it. after work, I gotta go to meeting my boyfriend. >> After work, I’m meeting up with my boyfriend. so I clicked the button to hold off my class. >> So I have to put the class on hold. sorry for that.... >> I’m sorry for thathow was your cumputer? Is it fixed? >> How was your computer? Is it fixed yet?see u, next monday. and have a good weekend. >> See you next Monday and have a good weekend.I miss you!! >> Correctbyebye >> Bye!

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