Lisa's diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I went to the dental clinic because of straightening of irregular teeth. A doctor is very kind.
He knows my aunt. So he gave me concessionary price for straightening of irredular teeth.
And I should heal cavity and joint's pain.
Accordingly, I will also go to the dental clinic tomorrow.
I hope not to suffer pain as soon as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hi Lisa!!!! Good evening!! Thanks for doing your homework! ^^ I appreciate it. I hope you’re not that in pain right now. See you later in class!!
~ T. Christine ~
Today I went to the dental clinic because of straightening of irregular teeth.
>> Today, I went to the dental clinic because I wanted to undergo teeth alignment.
A doctor is very kind.
>> The doctor was very kind.He knows my aunt.
>> Correct!
So he gave me concessionary price for straightening of irredular teeth.
>> So he gave me a reasonable price for my teeth alignment.And I should heal cavity and joint's pain.
>> And I should allow my teeth and gums to heal.Accordingly, I will also go to the dental clinic tomorrow.
>> As a result, I will again have to go to the dental clinic tomorrow.I hope not to suffer pain as soon as possible.
>> I hope I won’t be able to feel pain anytime soon.
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