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2011-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Today I went to the dental clinic because of straightening of irregular teeth. A doctor is very kind. He knows my aunt. So he gave me concessionary price for straightening of irredular teeth. And I should heal cavity and joint's pain. Accordingly, I will also go to the dental clinic tomorrow. I hope not to suffer pain as soon as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hi Lisa!!!! Good evening!! Thanks for doing your homework! ^^ I appreciate it. I hope you’re not that in pain right now. See you later in class!! ~ T. Christine ~   Today I went to the dental clinic because of straightening of irregular teeth. >> Today, I went to the dental clinic because I wanted to undergo teeth alignment.  A doctor is very kind. >> The doctor was very kind.He knows my aunt. >> Correct!  So he gave me concessionary price for straightening of irredular teeth. >> So he gave me a reasonable price for my teeth alignment.And I should heal cavity and joint's pain. >> And I should allow  my teeth and gums to heal.Accordingly, I will also go to the dental clinic tomorrow. >> As a result, I will again have to go to the dental clinic tomorrow.I hope not to suffer pain as soon as possible. >> I hope I won’t be able to feel pain anytime soon.

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