Lisa's diary
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Hello there Lisa!!! Happy Monday!! I hope you had a great weekend!! See you later in class ^^,
Today is Ji-won's birthday.
>> Correct.
To my surprise Jeong-seop's birthday is same.
>> To my surprise, they
have the same birthday with Jeong-seop.
Two people are my best friends.
>> These two are my
best friends.
I bought some presents for them and I gave presents.
>> I
bought them some presents.
I
hope they like those.
>> I
hope they liked them.
One
present is body lotion and body wash for Ji-won.
>> I bought a body lotion for Jeong-seop and a
body-wash for Ji-won.
Those items are effictive for reducing her weight.
>> Those items are
effective for weight loss.
The other present is face lotion for Jeong-seop.
>> Correct!
I celebrate thier birthday.
>> We celebrated
their birthday.
but I'm sad because my purse is much lighter.
>> But I뭢 sad because my purse is now much lighter.
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