Lisa's Diary
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sunny,Tues, 22 Feb
Today, I was very tired.
Because my medicine made me tired.
I should seem sleeped all day.
But my joint of chin isn't painful.
Today is orientation for freshman in our university.
So I was able to see my proteges.
I didn't believe I am sophomore now.
I hate getting old.
Because I should choose something by myself.
And many thing is changed in my life.
This heavy responsible is unpleasant.
강사 첨삭
Hi there beautiful and fantastic Lisa!!!
It's a sunny Tuesday here in the Philippines! How about in your place?
Did you have a great day today? I'm hoping that you're still energized for our class later. I'm looking forward to talk to you again. ^^
Thanks for always doing your homework. Continue practicing, reading more books and writing your compositions.
Keep up the good performance!!
~ T. Chris~
(>_<)
sunny,Tues, 22 Feb
>> Tuesday, February 22 Today, I was very tired. Because my medicine made me tired.
>> I was very tired today because of the side-effect of my medicine.I should seem sleeped all day. But my joint of chin isn't painful.
>> I should have slept all day, however my joints are painful.
>> I had planned to sleep all day, however my joints felt painful.
Today is orientation for freshman in our university. So I was able to see my proteges.>> Today is the orientation day for the freshmen in our university, so I was able to see my prot??.>> The freshmen in our university were given an orientation today, so I was able to see my prot??.
I didn't believe I am sophomore now.>> I can't believe I am a sophomore now.
I hate getting old. Because I should choose something by myself.
>> I hate getting old because now I have to make decisions independently.>> I hate getting old because I should now make my decisions on my own.
And many thing is changed in my life.>> In addition, many things have changed in my life.
This heavy responsible is unpleasant.
>> It gives me an unpleasant feeling when I have a heavy responsibility.
OR >> I don't like the feeling of having additional responsibilities.
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