Lisa's Diary

2011-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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sunny,Tues, 22 Feb Today, I was very tired. Because my medicine made me tired. I should seem sleeped all day. But my joint of chin isn't painful. Today is orientation for freshman in our university. So I was able to see my proteges. I didn't believe I am sophomore now. I hate getting old. Because I should choose something by myself. And many thing is changed in my life. This heavy responsible is unpleasant.

강사 첨삭

Hi there beautiful and fantastic Lisa!!! It's a sunny Tuesday here in the Philippines! How about in your place?  Did you have a great day today? I'm hoping that you're still energized for our class later. I'm looking forward to talk to you again. ^^ Thanks for always doing your homework. Continue practicing, reading more books and writing your compositions.  Keep up the good performance!!  ~ T. Chris~  (>_<)   sunny,Tues, 22 Feb >>  Tuesday, February 22   Today, I was very tired. Because my medicine made me tired. >>  I was very tired today because of the side-effect of my medicine.I should seem sleeped all day. But my joint of chin isn't painful. >> I should have slept all day, however my joints are painful. >> I had planned to sleep all day, however my joints felt painful. Today is orientation for freshman in our university. So I was able to see my proteges.>> Today is the orientation day for the freshmen in our university, so I was able to see my prot??.>> The freshmen in our university were given an orientation today, so I was able to see my prot??. I didn't believe I am sophomore now.>> I can't believe I am a sophomore now. I hate getting old. Because I should choose something by myself. >> I hate getting old because now I have to make decisions independently.>> I hate getting old because I should now make my decisions on my own. And many thing is changed in my life.>> In addition, many things have changed in my life. This heavy responsible is unpleasant. >> It gives me an unpleasant feeling when I have a heavy responsibility. OR >> I don't like the feeling of having additional responsibilities.

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