Lisa's Diary

Wednesday, February 23 Title: I'm so lonely. I met him last year when he was a senior. He is 5 age older than me. We had a good time last year. However, he becomes a business man and he goes to two language institutes. So he is too busy. In addition, he goes to a church every sundays. He feels tired and exhausted. He did quite nicely by me. But he is changed. I have a boyfriend but I'm so lonely. He knows this situation. Nevertheless, his attitude is same. I want that my boyfriend pays attention to me. I don't know how to do.

It’s a great Wednesday evening beautiful Lisa!! Your composition today sounds a little sad but hey, cheer up!! I agree that we all deserve to have someone who appreciates us for who we are and pays attention to our needs too. Only time can tell if your boyfriend is really the right one for you. Moreover, I do hope that you can still see the other things in your life that really count. Our family, friends, the smiles we get from other people, the gadgets or materials we own, these are the many things that we can be very grateful for. Smile today and learn to share it with other people! One smile makes a really big difference!    Here’s mine! ^___________________________^   See you later in class!!! ~ Chris~ Wednesday, February 23Title: I'm so lonely.I met him last year when he was a senior. >> Corrrect!He is 5 age older than me. >> He is 5 years my senior. OR >> He is 5 years older than me.  We had a good time last year. >> Correct! OR >> We shared good times last year. OR >> Last year, we had lots of fun together.However, he becomes a business man and he goes to two language institutes.>> However, he is now a businessman and he attends two language institutes. OR >> However, he became a businessman and he now studies in two language institutes. So he is too busy.>> Correct! In addition, he goes to a church every sundays.better to say >> In addition, he goes to church every Sunday. He feels tired and exhausted.>> Correct! He did quite nicely by me.>> He was very nice to me. But he is changed.>> But now I feel like he has already changed. >> However, he has changed. I have a boyfriend but I'm so lonely.>> Correct! He knows this situation. Nevertheless, his attitude is same.>> He is aware of my grievances, nevertheless, he doesn’t try to change his attitude towards our relationship. I want that my boyfriend pays attention to me.>> Correct! I don't know how to do. >> I don’t know what to do.