Lisa's diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I met my middle school friend.
His name is Hyeon-U.
He entrances into university.
After 3 month, he will join the army.
We went to a special cafe in Hong-Dae.
That cafe's name is Dream Cafe.
I like Dream cafe becace of delicious cupcakes and storing time
capsules.
We left letters and we will read these letters after 2 years.
I wish to have good friendship during life with him.
강사 첨삭
Hello and good evening!!! Thanks for doing your homework!! Have a great weekend!! Take care!
~ T. Chris~
Today, I met my middle school friend.
>> Correct!His name is Hyeon-U.
>> Correct! He entrances into university.
>> He has just entered university.After 3 month, he will join the army.
>> After 3 months he will join the army.We went to a special cafe in Hong-Dae.
>> Correct!That cafe's name is Dream Cafe.
>> Correct!I like Dream cafe becace of delicious cupcakes and storing time capsules.
>> I like Dream cafe because of delicious cupcakes and because we can store time capsules.We left letters and we will read these letters after 2 years.
>> We left letters that we will be reading after 2 years.I wish to have good friendship during life with him.a
>> I wish that our friendship will continue for a long time and will remain strong.
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