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2011-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, I met my middle school friend. His name is Hyeon-U. He entrances into university. After 3 month, he will join the army. We went to a special cafe in Hong-Dae. That cafe's name is Dream Cafe. I like Dream cafe becace of delicious cupcakes and storing time capsules. We left letters and we will read these letters after 2 years. I wish to have good friendship during life with him.

강사 첨삭

Hello and good evening!!! Thanks for doing your homework!! Have a great weekend!! Take care! ~ T. Chris~ Today, I met my middle school friend. >> Correct!His name is Hyeon-U. >> Correct! He entrances into university. >> He has just entered university.After 3 month, he will join the army. >> After 3 months he will join the army.We went to a special cafe in Hong-Dae. >> Correct!That cafe's name is Dream Cafe. >> Correct!I like Dream cafe becace of delicious cupcakes and storing time capsules. >> I like Dream cafe because of delicious cupcakes and because we can store time capsules.We left letters and we will read these letters after 2 years. >> We left letters that we will be reading after 2 years.I wish to have good friendship during life with him.a >>  I wish that our friendship will continue for a long time and will remain strong.

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