Lisa's Diary

University starts today. I met many friends. Start makes my heart flutter. I want to learn many things. I learn a course of study for the teaching profession from this semester. I hope to make firm teaching faith. ----------------------------------------------------- Excuse me. I have a question. You proofread my diary on February 23 This is your correcting sentence. < However, he becomes a businessman and he now studies in two language institutes.> But I think below is right. < However, he becomes a businessman and he now studys in two langauge institute.>

Hello Lisa!! It’s such a lovely Wednesday! How have you been? It’s been awhile since I heard your pretty voice!! It’s so great to see you’ve done your diary today and that you checked the past corrections I gave you. ^^  I hope you had a pretty fascinating day in your university. See you later in class!! ~ Chris (>_~) ~ University starts today. >> Correct but try to complete your sentences. ^^ >> Our new semester in our university starts today.I met many friends. >> Correct!Start makes my heart flutter.>> I feel like my heart is fluttering. >> I think I feel so excited that my heart flutters. I want to learn many things.>> Correct! I learn a course of study for the teaching profession from this semester.>> I enrolled in some education units  for this semester. I hope to make firm teaching faith.>> I hope to be able to firmly follow my dreams of becoming a teacher. Excuse me. I have a question.>> Excuse me, I have a question. OR >> May I please ask a question? You proofread my diary on February 23>> You proofread my diary that I wrote last February 23. This is your correcting sentence. >> This was the correction that you gave.< However, he becomes a businessman and he now studies in twolanguage institutes.>But I think below is right.< However, he becomes a businessman and he now studys in two langauge institute.> >> Thank you very much for your question. I believe that the correct spelling is "studies" and not "studys."  -- You can use this website as a reference^^: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/studies