Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
I met my friends and seniors who went to China with me last summer vacation.
We had a good time.
I like them. They are so kind and friendly.
I drunk alcoholic drink with them today.
So I want to put off my class but I didn't do that because of time limit. It's Ok.
강사 첨삭
Hi Lisa!!! Good to see your diary contents here. (>_<) Hope you’re doing well, see you later in class!! ^^ ~Chris~
I met my friends and seniors who went to China with me last summer vacation.>> Correct!
We had a good time.
>> Correct!I like them.
>> Correct!
They are so kind and friendly. >> Correct!
I drunk alcoholic drink with them today.
>> I drank alcoholic drinks with them today.So I want to put off my class but I didn't do that because of time limit.
>> So I wanted to put off my class but I didn't do that because of the time limit.
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