Lisa's Diary

2011-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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I met my friends and seniors who went to China with me last summer vacation. We had a good time. I like them. They are so kind and friendly. I drunk alcoholic drink with them today. So I want to put off my class but I didn't do that because of time limit. It's Ok.

강사 첨삭

    Hi Lisa!!! Good to see your diary contents here. (>_<) Hope you’re doing well, see you later in class!! ^^ ~Chris~ I met my friends and seniors who went to China with me last summer vacation.>> Correct! We had a good time. >> Correct!I like them. >> Correct! They are so kind and friendly. >> Correct! I drunk alcoholic drink with them today. >> I drank alcoholic drinks with them today.So I want to put off my class but I didn't do that because of time limit. >> So I wanted to put off my class but I didn't do that because of the time limit.

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