Lisa's Diary

2011-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

It's new semester. I am worried this semester. Because Bak Hui Seok professor who is well-known for quite a little homework teaches me research class. Today is his first class at this semester. This class is very hard. But it is very helpful for me. So I want to learn many things. I was a best student in my department last semester. I don't want to miss this title. Because only one can get whole scholarship. Please give me A+! I hope this semester is thought no regret. You can do it, Lisa!

강사 첨삭

Yes Lisa! You can do it!! Ajah ajah!!! ^^, You are a very exceptional and talented student, I know you can win the best student award? ^^, ~ Thanks so much for your diary again!! ~ Have a very nice evening ahead. ~(>_<)~ T. Chris It's new semester. >> It's the start of our new semester. OR >> It's already the new semester.I am worried this semester. Because Bak Hui Seok professor who is well-known for quite a little homework teaches me research class.>> I am worried this semester because Bak Hui Seok, a professor well known for giving short homework, is my teacher for my Research class. Today is his first class at this semester.>> Today is his first class for this semester. This class is very hard.>> Good sentence. But it is very helpful for me.>> Good sentence. OR >> However, I know it will be very useful for me. So I want to learn many things.>> Good sentence. I was a best student in my department last semester.>> I was the best student in my department last semester. OR >> I won the title Best Student in my department last semester. I don't want to miss this title. Because only one can get whole scholarship.>> I don't want to miss the chance of getting this award because only one student is entitled to have this scholarship. Please give me A+!>> Good sentence. I hope this semester is thought no regret.>> I hope this semester I won't be having any regrets. You can do it, Lisa! >> Good sentence.

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