Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
It's new semester.
I am worried this semester.
Because Bak Hui Seok professor who is well-known for quite a little homework teaches me research class.
Today is his first class at this semester.
This class is very hard.
But it is very helpful for me.
So I want to learn many things.
I was a best student in my department last semester.
I don't want to miss this title.
Because only one can get whole scholarship.
Please give me A+!
I hope this semester is thought no regret.
You can do it, Lisa!
강사 첨삭
Yes Lisa! You can do it!! Ajah ajah!!! ^^, You are a very exceptional and talented student, I know you can win the best student award? ^^,
~ Thanks so much for your diary again!!
~ Have a very nice evening ahead. ~(>_<)~ T. Chris
It's new semester.
>> It's the start of our new semester.
OR >> It's already the new semester.I am worried this semester. Because Bak Hui Seok professor who is well-known for quite a little homework teaches me research class.>> I am worried this semester because Bak Hui Seok, a professor well known for giving short homework, is my teacher for my Research class.
Today is his first class at this semester.>> Today is his first class for this semester.
This class is very hard.>> Good sentence.
But it is very helpful for me.>> Good sentence.
OR >> However, I know it will be very useful for me.
So I want to learn many things.>> Good sentence.
I was a best student in my department last semester.>> I was the best student in my department last semester.
OR >> I won the title Best Student in my department last semester.
I don't want to miss this title. Because only one can get whole scholarship.>> I don't want to miss the chance of getting this award because only one student is entitled to have this scholarship.
Please give me A+!>> Good sentence.
I hope this semester is thought no regret.>> I hope this semester I won't be having any regrets.
You can do it, Lisa!
>> Good sentence.
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